For life I do not fear
For death I can not wait
Where life is not a promise
I will only believe today
A few years were few moments
Few moments are my entire life
When I stand you should know
I can be what I despise
A long cry is my whisper
It can be heard only in my sky
I do know what I want
It's what I need I can not find
Let's pretend everything now
No reasons left for us to fight
You are gone and it's known
That I can stand my own reflection
Knowing you I don't know what's right
2 comments:
Beautiful poem Jassi!! Perfect..!
A blend of beauty and melancholy and wondered how u got that in ur expression and then read the italicized statement in the start...hmmm..!!
the poem has a depth in its framework...could only understand it after reading twice...good work but needs improvement in coherence..one stanza has four lines n if i've understood the poem correctly the last two lines are are not corresponding to what you said in the first two lines
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